White : 55 Words

Staring straight into the shining sun,
The brightness had blinded me,
I could see no thing or person,
I could feel no emotion,

I was floating in the oblivion,
I see everything white and bright,
It felt so pure,
And at that moment I had realised,
It was my own soul,
and it appears white and bright…

My first attempt at 55 Words Poetry 😀

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2 comments

  1. Rashmi · November 16, 2009

    55er shows u luv urself..good attempt 🙂

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