White : 55 Words

2009 November 16
by Kalyan Ram Vempati

Staring straight into the shining sun,
The brightness had blinded me,
I could see no thing or person,
I could feel no emotion,

I was floating in the oblivion,
I see everything white and bright,
It felt so pure,
And at that moment I had realised,
It was my own soul,
and it appears white and bright…

My first attempt at 55 Words Poetry :D

2 Responses leave one →
  1. 2009 November 16

    55er shows u luv urself..good attempt :-)

    • 2009 November 16

      Thanks Rashmi :)

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